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EMW
Prototype Evaluation:
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Suggestion |
Planned Action |
| Applying the
style guide to the entire first line not just the first letter. |
Fix |
| Page load problems; required QuickTime; issues loading QuickTime graphic | May
have had an issue while the QuickTime video was loading. I am hoping
to make the Flash movie work correctly, so that this will not be
an issue, but I am not optimistic. |
| Used only a single source for content. | Cited a second source as a general reference. |
| First sentence awkward and less than informative without reading further. | Rewrite first paragraph. |
| Timing in second movie clip might work better if the audio narration and graphic did not start simultaneously. | Try to fix if Flash will let me. |
| Alpha prototype problem with audio narration starting automatically before the reader got to the second graphic. Recommended starting with a button or mouse-over. | Fixed in beta version by converting to QuickTime with included movie player commands and instructions NOT to autostart. |
| Alpha prototype movie clip ended with a white screen - no image | Fixed in beta version. |
| Keep the size of the "(((AUDIO)))" image larger as it moves towards the ear as it disappears before it gets there. Make a visual "Ping" when the audio image gets to the ear to show when it arrives. | Fix |
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